The Checkered Camel Company

   Thursday, February 06, 2003  

Cotton Candy


April remained after school to review the Napoleon case with Kari and Ms. Parnell. I fulfilled my secretarial duties at the blissfully abbreviated German Club meeting before throwing my backpack into the European history room and wandering about for a while.

I went to Mr. Powell's room and collected the ballots from my oratory rounds. I need their comments as I revise my speech. I would like to accomplish something at State, such as placing above anyone. If I trounce at least one other person out of the untold number competing, I will be satisfied. My ballots, cumulatively, have informed me thus:
1. I need more concrete support for my points.
2. I could better animate my expressions.
3. It would behoove me to vary my vocal tone and pace.
4. A few points seem inexplicit.
5. My time requires cutting.
    at 3:43 PM